
You hired a voice actor, the first draft of audio landed in your inbox, and something about it is not quite right. Maybe a line reads too fast, or the tone feels off in the second paragraph. Now you have to put that reaction into words your talent can act on. This is the part of the voiceover revision process where projects either move smoothly toward approval or stall out in three rounds of vague back-and-forth. After years of recording in my booth and reading client notes at my editing desk, I can tell you the difference almost always comes down to how the feedback is written.
Good voice actor feedback is specific, kind, and focused on the result you want to hear. Here is how to give it.
Point to the Exact Spot
The single most useful thing you can do is tell me where. "The energy drops in the middle" sends me hunting through a ninety second read trying to guess which middle you mean. Instead, give me a timestamp or quote the line.
Try this: "At 0:34, the line 'call us today' feels rushed." Or quote it directly: "On 'we've been family owned since 1985,' the read sounds flat."
Most audio players show a running timestamp, so this costs you almost nothing and saves a full round of revisions. When I know the exact spot, I can pull up that take in Reaper, compare it against the alternate reads I recorded, and often fix it without you waiting on a whole new session.
Describe the Feeling You Want
Clients sometimes try to direct like an engineer: "Boost the highs," or "add more compression," or "lower the pitch." I appreciate the instinct, but technical notes usually point at the wrong fix. What you are really reacting to is a feeling.
Tell me the emotion or impression you are after instead. "It should feel warmer, like you're talking to one person" gives me something to perform. So does "more confident here, landing the line like a statement." I handle the technical side at my desk with iZotope RX and my DAW. Your job is to tell me what you want the listener to feel, and I will figure out the mic technique, the pacing, and the processing that gets there.
A few examples of notes I can act on right away:
- "Friendlier on the opening line, like you're greeting a regular customer."
- "Slow down on the phone number so it's easy to write down."
- "This brand is playful, so loosen up the second half."
Give Me a Reference
When words are not landing, point to something I can hear. If you have a previous ad you loved, a competitor's spot, or even another line in my own read that nailed the tone, send it over. "Match the energy you had on line three, but for the whole script" is one of the most efficient notes a client can give me, because it uses my own voice as the target.
References work for pacing too. "About twenty percent slower, closer to a documentary narrator" tells me more than "slow it down" because it gives me a feel and a ceiling at the same time.
Batch Your Notes Into One Pass
Few things slow a voiceover revision process more than feedback arriving in pieces. A note on Monday, a new thought on Tuesday, a third email Thursday after you replayed it in the car. Each message can mean another recording session, another setup in the booth, another round of editing.
Listen to the full read at least twice, write down every change in one document, then send it. Group your notes by line or timestamp so I can work through them in order. One clear list lets me knock out every fix in a single session and get you to approval faster. This is the simplest of all voiceover approval tips and the one clients overlook most.
If your priorities differ, say so. "The first three are must-fix, the last two are nice to have" helps me focus my energy and helps you stay on budget.
Separate Script Changes From Performance Notes
Two very different things can go wrong with a draft, and they are worth keeping apart. A script change is rewording the copy: a new tagline, a corrected product name, a dropped sentence. A performance note is about how the existing words are delivered.
Why does the distinction matter? Script changes mean I re-record fresh lines, which sometimes affects timing and budget, especially if your project was quoted at a set word count. Performance notes usually mean re-reading lines that already exist. When you label each one ("SCRIPT: change 'affordable' to 'budget-friendly'" versus "READ: more upbeat on the closing line"), I know immediately what kind of work each note involves and nothing slips through.
This also protects you. If a script keeps growing during revisions, a quick heads up about scope lets us talk it through before the surprise shows up on an invoice.
A Quick Note on Tone
You will not hurt my feelings. Direct, specific notes are a gift, and "this take isn't working for me, here's why" is far more useful than padding the email with apologies. Working voice actors revise constantly. It is a normal, expected part of the job, and a clear critique tells me you know what you want, which makes my work easier and your final product stronger.
Strong voice actor feedback comes down to one thing: pointing clearly at what you hear and what you want to hear instead. You do not need the right industry vocabulary to do that.
If you are mid-project and ready to get your script to the finish line, or you are looking for a voice actor who treats revisions as a normal part of great work, reach out through trevorohare.com and let's get your next take exactly right.

Trevor O'Hare
Professional Voice Actor & Podcast Producer
Trevor is a professional voiceover artist and podcast production specialist based in Orlando, FL. He works from a professional home studio equipped with a Whisper Room vocal booth, Sennheiser MKH416, and has completed thousands of projects across commercial, animation, e-learning, narration, and more. He also runs VOTrainer.com, where he coaches aspiring and working voice actors. Need to hire a voice actor? Browse vetted talent at RealVOTalent.com.
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